Between the Days

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    Between the Days

    When the earth rolls over

    And turns its light down long and low

    My soul hangs between the days

    Lulled by the content of my illusions

    I close my eyes

    And open my heart to dream

    Embracing the empty page of my imagination

    I fall relentlessly into the void

    Between what is present and what is past

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    ApaqRasgirl commented on Between the Days

    11-03-2010

    that was a wonderful little piece dear......you have captured the feelings of many a poet with this one.......we are all often trapped in the in-between and are inspired by our emotions to let are hands flow across the pages........I am sure you have so much more out there to share with us, I eagerly await more of your wonderful posts....love asha
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    kdarcy commented on Between the Days

    10-20-2010

    Ok, what else is there to read? You holdin out on us, lol An excellent write, leaving me wanting more, be well k
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    soulwriter commented on Between the Days

    10-20-2010

    I re-read Trade Winds and then see it's magic - your magic in this piece.... the same peacefulness resides in your words. Keep writing and post more soon....
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    GypsySoul73

    10/20/2010

    Thank you for your comments soulwriter. I love that you see peacefulness and even magic in my words :) I will post another poem soon. Peace, love, and light on your path always. Gypsy Soul

    jamie7121f commented on Between the Days

    09-23-2010

    Short and full of meaning :) I like it. Great job!!
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    GypsySoul73

    10/17/2010

    Hello jamie7121f. Thank you for the great comment. Peace, love and light on your path always. Gypsy Soul

    Olan01 commented on Between the Days

    08-22-2010

    To me a poem is never short if it is whole; this poem is whole, complete and comtemplative; I like it.
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    GypsySoul73

    10/17/2010

    Thank you Olan01 for your constructive comment. I like it. Peace, love and light on your path always. Gypsy Soul

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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