Bewildered

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  • Confusion

    Bewildered

    Once we had more, than a good thing going, on

    What happened?

    We were more than lovers we were soul mates,

    What happened?

    We talked on the phone oftentimes for hours on,

    What happened?

    Certain conversations, led to erotic sensations,

    What happened?

    We would end every call; “love me some you 2 2,”

    What happened?

    Was it’s me, thinking we were right for each other

    What happened?

    Now when I call you won’t answer your phone,

    What happened?

    There must be a reason, for your change in heart

    What happened?

    Help ease my mind, that I may put it all behind,

    Tell me what happened and why?

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    DevinMcNabb commented on Bewildered

    11-22-2010

    I can feel the pain and confusion poured into the words here; your weakness fill the page, and I admire you for it. Well written, good sir, well written.
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    Lizziewriter27 commented on Bewildered

    02-16-2010

    I like the stanza's...i've always found poems with meaning come across easier if you have a recurring phrase to help guide your reader. I like the poem also, i can get a feel for what you mean. I've been there...not the greatest thing
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