Beyond The Looking Glass

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    This was written in less than 4 min. Sometimes you just gotta go for it. Take what your feeling right now, and put it to words RIGHT NOW!

    Beyond The Looking Glass




    I want to see how deep
    the rabbit hole goes,
    to venture beyond the looking glass,
    into a world of touch, taste and feel

    My imagination knows no bounds,
    my heart no fear,
    my will flows with the power of rapids in spring thaw,
    my eyes hunger to see what is real

    The pen that awaits
    the hand of the dreamer,
    the wind that embraces
    the bird in flight

    Feed me
    Feed upon me




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    tenderpoison commented on Beyond The Looking Glass

    12-08-2010

    almost speechless - I really really love this one. You've captured the surreal moment when we let go and leap - and you've done it perfectly. there's not a high enough rating for how much I like this. Excellent.

    danmartyjake1 commented on Beyond The Looking Glass

    11-11-2010

    I believe that your imagination knows no bounds and your heart no fear. That is for sure. Very enticing poem. Smiles!

    kdarcy commented on Beyond The Looking Glass

    10-20-2010

    Excellent, I love this, the closing was great. I see you ARE well. Stop by and see my offerings, I miss your comment, be well k

    Artie

    11/10/2010

    I'm glad you enjoyed this. Thx for reading, and for the great comment.

    wamomo commented on Beyond The Looking Glass

    10-11-2010

    Did I mention my real name is Alice?...lol... I love this!!! You have brilliantly communicated the insatiable curiosity you hold, that catapults you to depths of reason and knowledge far beyond the parameters of perceived limitation your world presents...in a SHORT, no less. Yeah...I'm rolling my eyes in jealousy...lol...bravo, Artie! :-)

    Artie

    11/12/2010

    Well hello Alice, and thank you for such a great compliment. I'm glad you enjoyed this.

    Rhymer commented on Beyond The Looking Glass

    09-30-2010

    Your imagination and gift for bringing your thoughts alive with the written word simply inspires the rest of us. Another excellent write.

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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