Bipolar World

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We only get one shot at life sometimes. Chosing who to spend it with can be the shot that kills us. I suggest you date for a good while, feel them ALL the way out before you settle down.

Bipolar World

You love me. You love me not.
You love me. You love me not.
You love me. You love me not.
(continuing softly as I speak)
Sometimes I sit and stare at you wondering,...You love me. You love me not. (You love me. You love me not.) 
what are you thinking?(You love me. you love me not.)
Are you thinking? (You love me. you love me not.)
Why are you thinking?(You love me. You love me not.)
You know I love you.(You love me, You love me not.)
Do you love me?... That is the question.(You love me. You love me not.)
I sometimes sit and I wonder why, why me?(You love me. You love me not.)
Why must I deal with a person that switch up like the wind.(You love me. You love me not.)
I have no problem with loving you.(You love me. You love me not.)
I accepted everything about you.(You love me. You love me not.)
There are things I want to change about you.(You love me. You love me

I did things that I would have laughed at others about.(You love me. You love me not.)
I walked distances for food and supplies.(You love me. You love me not.)
I carried them all with no ride.(You love me. You love me not.)
I was here when I could have been over there.(You love me. You love me not.)
I threw my life away to start over with you.(You love me. You love me not.)
You did not have to ask.(You love me. You love me not.)
That's how much I love you.(You love me. You love me not.)
So do you? do you not?(You love me. You love me not.)
Love me? Love me not?
I can only be me.

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katzeyez1979 commented on Bipolar World

10-13-2018

Its been a few years since I was last on here,close to 10 I'd say. Life happened.as did mental ups and downs. you nailed the mind to a tee!

katzeyez1979 commented on Bipolar World

11-06-2011

I found myself reliving a time in my life,in my past,through your words. I've been there,many of us have. I love it!

FordLove

11/17/2011

:) thanks I aim to give my life experience, but I am given extra credit for relating. LOL!

FordLove

12/23/2011

Hope you life is way better than those times.

Chaos128 commented on Bipolar World

01-12-2011

You brace for the bad weather and learn to appreciate the good weather that much more. It takes rare strength of character to commit to that extent, and rarer strength still to speak on it without bitterness. First class in every way!

FordLove

01/13/2011

Thank you Soldier of Chaos. I appreciate your wise eyes for my life's experience.

ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Bipolar World

01-03-2011

The pain and emotion in this one really touched me. Your honesty from a male perspective is refreshing and encouraging. Thank you for sharing yourself in a bold and fearless way. ;-)..............E

FordLove

01/03/2011

Honesty is the best policy, beside insurance policies,lol.

Phission commented on Bipolar World

12-30-2010

superb write ! i was absorbed in the honesty ..........9

FordLove

12/31/2010

Thanks

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