Bird Without Wings

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    hey i hope you guyz like this poem. my favorite celtic thunder song is A bird without wings. so i kinda made my own version of it as a poem i hope you all like it thanks enjoy

    Bird Without Wings

    Bird Without Wings

     

    sometimes I feel as though I can't breath

    like I am not going to survive today,

    all because you are not here

    because I miss you more then I can say.

     

    Like a bird without wings

    that is trying to fly,

    I try to stay alive and free

    you know why.

     

    How do you think I would act

    if my guardian angel wasn't here,

    watching over me

    that is what I most fear.

     

    Like a church with no steeple

    that is how we are,

    I'd be lost without you

    when you are far.

     

    Like a bird without wings that longs to be flying

    Like a motherless child left lonely and crying,

    I am lost without you watching

    with that I am not lying.

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    brandice commented on Bird Without Wings

    04-05-2011

    WHAT THE CRAP!?! that birds gonna fall outa the sky if it tries to fly oh well... no jk haha but i feel like that every weekend an the thing is im just his friend but i have a HUGE crush on him and he knows of course and he said were friends but it looks like were dating to so many poops but were not soooo i feel like tht all the time o sorry i just told you alot tht u probably didnt want to here SORRY...TEEHEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    loveswar09 commented on Bird Without Wings

    12-11-2009

    T.T Sad but very beautiful! I really liked it. The last part made me want to write another poem where I just let all my feelings go. Keep this up!!! Got it? =)

    elderwolf254 commented on Bird Without Wings

    08-02-2009

    very nice. it moves me i liked it very much. yuo know how to write girl

    nmedina commented on Bird Without Wings

    07-28-2009

    Very well written. I enjoyed the honesty and the deep feeling behind your words. It makes me think about those I miss.

    KENZIEMAC commented on Bird Without Wings

    07-27-2009

    this is great your symbolism is marvolus and the refrences are original. i love it, it really sounds like it comes from the heart! keep goin girl

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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