Bis Spatter

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    Bis Spatter

    In thy open palm blow night's hypnotic dust
    Utter enigma entwining twist
    Affliction lingers as that of awful taste
    The waste

    Spun the tapestry
    Youthful hopes manipulate
    Receptive psyche hesitates

    Grasp thy hand
    Toward the valleys amid foreboded skies
    Scavenger circle about as the dead die

    There is no anger only resentment
    Damage done
    Ghostly sensation

    Spawn this being exists before thee
    Creature numb to thee
    Memories continue to haunt
    Wander about their taunting

    Never considering till it was too late
    Walls rose tis fate
    Regretting now wasting the effort

    Hopes brought open your heart
    Take you that place
    Make your heart race

    Anticipating
    Feel the blood rush
    Hush place thy hand thy lips

    Silence, making my peace
    Your words
    The memories that come with them
    Pang in this heart
    This one would have offer it all
    Face the face that made this I must bid a due

    For you're lost in your ways
    My words are haze (to you)
    Evening mist carries off what's left of this heart

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    Tempestlady commented on Bis Spatter

    07-24-2009

    A heart broken deeply, may take too much time to trust and be understoond again. It explains why it takes courage to care. A heart in the wind, can grow wings again, and one day for a while may even learn to fly blowing in the wind. Enjoy what peace there may be in silence. Impressive vocabulary, would have liked more rhyme, and felt it could have been longer. Ane ode I would call it. To falling in and out of love. Good write, write on....

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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