Bitterness

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  • Jealousy
    • Kandrew
    • is so sorry she's been away so long! Trying desperately to catch up!

    Bitterness

    I wish to be the rock
    from which blood cannot be squeezed

    but I am like the peel of a banana

    bitter...and left behind

    ...watch your step.

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    Tyme commented on Bitterness

    09-17-2010

    This is cute and potent at the same time! You have said much in a few words. Good write!

    Len commented on Bitterness

    09-03-2010

    Excellent poem!!!!! It seemed to be everything bitter will never become. Warm, funny, surprising, and intriguing.

    cousinsoren commented on Bitterness

    03-10-2010

    Epigrammatic and succinctly clear. Nice little no nonsence warning verse,,,,:Watch your step! My rating is 10. Anybody surprised.? What is your rating or no rating? Watch your step! Don't trip!

    Marsink commented on Bitterness

    12-29-2009

    This is a slippery slope your tread. I like this considering the many possibilities of what havoc you could wreak, or food variations you could offer. May all your bruises only be external. Fanciful write!

    HarverTomsson commented on Bitterness

    12-29-2009

    Whoah! So much said so parsimoniously. This one keeps tickling after the eyes have stopped. HT

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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