Black Angel

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    Black Angel

    Obsidian fur and amber eyes watch her prey

    The pads on her paws make no sound

    Pupils dialate and take in every movement

    Teeth like the talons of eagles she bears a slight peek of them below her upper lip

    Familiar is her job but lizards are her game

    Love me is her motto and Gotham is her name 

    Crouching to pounce every muscle tightens like a springboard

    Her sleek body is made to hunt and kill

    The body of a killer and the mind of a predator

    The sun glistens off her blackness like an onyx jewel

    She is my jewel my treasure my black angel

    Wings of tenderness and love from the heart

    My heart is hers alone

    She comforts me with a swish of her tail and a rub from her head

    She is my love my black angel

    Wicked little look when I throw her ball

    Bounding to catch her toy before it escapes her clutches forever

    But she knows I will wave my wand and bring it back to her

    Mother to a black angel with a heart of gold

    She is my sweet my black angel my soul

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    kittylilly commented on Black Angel

    10-22-2009

    I bow down to ur wounderful gifted mind, very well , and the lines throw me in i give a 2 put its stop at an 10 so 10 it is. Blessed be
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    byjax commented on Black Angel

    06-08-2009

    I do not particularly like cats, but I understand... they do have a personality, and much of that is gained from their "owners", as if anyone can "own" a cat. Wave my wand and bring it back to her"... tell me, who has trained who?
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    ALPink commented on Black Angel

    05-30-2009

    i like it. i like how you desrcible the love for your cat and how sleeka and beautiful this cat is.
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    RavenBridge

    05/30/2009

    Thank you so much, Al. I love my little black angel! She's a very smart cat, even fetched like a dog! That's her favorite game! But, you keep up that good work!

    Amare13 commented on Black Angel

    05-30-2009

    I love that you wrote about your feline..It very detailed... Good for all us animal lovers!! I give this a ten--
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    RavenBridge

    05/30/2009

    Hey Amare, Thanks so much for the 10 on my poem! I love my little kitty so much and I bet she appreciates the 10 as well! There is another picture of her in my pictures folder on here. I also have my other cat, Bama that I will be writing about soon. He's my little old man because he's turning 10 this year. We've been through it all together. But, thanks again for the comment and the rating. :-)

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