black dragon

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  • Fantasy
    • dragongarcia
    • Losing everything I loved but trying to keep going

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    a poem i wrote with my dear friend annie

    black dragon

    through the darkness
    under the sky
    evil lives
    and bids its evil time
    it hides its face
    in human shape
    in parrel of its evil ways
    it roams the earth looking for souls
    to feed its evil soul
    what is evil?
    this evil is called black dragon
    in the night you cannot see her
    she is as evil as the black knight
    she hides her form from human eyes
    look in her eyes if you truly believe
    you'll see her true form

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    indigoschild commented on black dragon

    06-06-2014

    I contest that what you describe is not in fact a dragon but a demon. Dragons are of the light. Unless of course you don't actually think dragons exist, in which case, well done. I know of the creatures you describe..... It's not a dragon. lol

    dragongarcia

    12/01/2015

    exactly. me and my friend ann wrote this together our freshman year almost 10 years ago

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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