Black Label

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  • TheAngelOfDeath
  • Posted a new poem first time is a few years check it out its a draft as of right now ill fix the spelling and stuff when I have time

Black Label

I do nothing wrong yet you label me black as the dead of night
you put this curse upon my name for the sake of yourself
Deep thought ..the emissions of a black pulse from the mind
run through the viens of a tormented soul
This Black Label you put on me sucks the very life from my existance
Every turn on the road of life gets harder with each passing day
For every second Im alive this lable sucks the life from me
It tells me I am nothing
I am hopless..
No-one cares..
I am but a dark empty shell with no purpose..
Your lable.. it covers my eyes Blacker than night..
For if you are blind you cannot see your fate..
Only the few that can see through thier third eye can remove this
Black Label from thier eyes and control thier own Destiny..
I have removed your lable and placed it on you..
Question is....
Are you Third-eye-Blind?

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Zephyr commented on Black Label

09-02-2009

Although I have trouble accepting the metaphysical, this poem still rings true. I know this feeling, more than I'd like to admit. This poem has earned you a new follower. Well done.

anneliseh commented on Black Label

06-25-2009

that was amazingly awesome!

GrimsLover commented on Black Label

04-28-2009

Wow great poem! i didnt know you could right so good?

ripuree commented on Black Label

04-16-2009

The negative stereotypt that is put on the words black, dark and all other related words were just one race's intentions to diminish and desecrate those with black skin. If as a white person you are so negatively affected by that word, can you now see how the dictionary and all Western white literature are set up to keep black people feeling defeated, and mad every moment of their lives, without knowing exactly why? That is the hidden most destructive part of Internation Institutionalized racism

heartspillsover commented on Black Label

03-20-2009

Powerful. Very good.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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