Black Man, I Am Thee

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Black Man, I Am Thee

I am black man, I let you know that I am from thee and this is my pride
my proudness of just being who I am, with a sista by my side...
Not good enough, things now in a time of dark and mistrust be still
even though I wanna challenge my sistas, loyalty be my will...
I wanna feel loved, I wanna feel spirited, the feeling of honesty at bay
because of the honest love of a honest wmona, no more can i say...
She be strong, resistant, striving for both sides, that appeals to me
I say of my self, be real black man, I am black me, yes I am thee...
Our children need us to be fathers, our women need us to be men
we need to stand up, be ourselves don't fall by the wayside again...
I don't downgrade us, I talk as if a woman were saying what i write
but our sistas want us to emerge from the dark, come to the light...
I don't write this poem just because of my pen, i write for my heart
but the real reason is because I love woman, that tempted me to start...
these things called trust, honesty and faith, they look for in me
I call of myself, let me be these things, I am black man, I am thee...
Edward Orlando Griffin

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1990lh commented on Black Man, I Am Thee

08-06-2009

nicely done i agree wth shontel such passion u speak i love the poem great job

shontel commented on Black Man, I Am Thee

06-08-2009

I love my black men. You speak with such passion and authority. I feel like you, I would never turn my back on my black man.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

edgee’s Poems (35)

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me being write or wrong 0
untitled love 0
random thought 0
Save Me 0
random thought 0
Save Me 1
this woman again 1
this time i cry 3
3 o'clock low 1
we as a people 1
still wondering 2
Don't Bother 3
playing the puppet 3
strange ways 4
drift away 1
broken 1
did we try 7
for you, i will 5
Letters To My Poets 2
"Fear" 1
love is again 3
love is 6
Black Man, I Am Thee 2
my manhood, my curse 3
This Woman, Beautiful Woman 8
Nobody Know.... -17
Guess Who's Back... 1
a phone conversation 2
just my feelings 1
Something Not To See 1
Strength 2
Don't Know 1
My Temple 0
The Ghost of Me 5
My Present, My Past, Not My Future 2