black rose

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    • quise
    • Now keep in mind that im an artist and im sensitive about my shit -eryka badu

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    black rose

    walking threw a garden one day i noticed a rose bush of red roses 
    one particular rose stuck out it looked alot like the rest of the roses except the fact it was black yet it wasnt dead
    as i sat next to the bush staring at the black delicate flower i flash back to my past relationship of why all the roses in my bush are'nt red anymore
    one day this rose must have been red when it had its love and a heartbeat,
    but its heartbeat was stolen alot like she had stole my heartbeat
    the other rose must have been special to this now black rose
    and when the red rose had left it the black rose turned cold and was alone and in envy of all the other red roses in love
    as his color changed without the roses love its blood turned cold and black all the way up into its pedals 
      as i had felt this same way once befor 
    maybe the rose is suffocating without the other roses love
    there have been replacment roses but still the black rose's red color never came back
    as im leaving the park i notice this women who is no longer a little girl but a beautiful women
     as we reunite i want to point out to her the beautiful black rose
     as i hold her hand to point the rose out i notice her beautiful smile as i smile at her 
    i look at the rose bush and all the roses are red not a black rose in sight
    i look where the black rose was all alone and there is not one black rose but two beautiful red roses wrapped around eachother as the other roses are 
    as i wonder what have i seen just moments ago
    my beauty on my arm says "look baby" and points to writing on the ground that says every rose has its thorns but never let go when you get poked just hold tighter for the moment

          -gods son

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    AmadeusEx commented on black rose

    07-03-2009

    what a story that was, youre imaginative man...i like the idea of the rose being black because in your heart you felt black, and every bush always one black rose cause that black rose is you, than you found someone to melt your heart, and your rose blooms red again...very cool poem

    photochick commented on black rose

    07-03-2009

    Great job love the flow and the message you are putting out there great emotion look forward to reading more of your work

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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