Black Roses (Part 3) Queen of the Undead

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  • queenrosered
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This is part 3 of my Black Roses Vampire Series. Please read them in order, as they tell a story and there are a total of 15 poems. Please, enjoy and thank you for reading. Rose.

Black Roses (Part 3) Queen of the Undead

I have mourned long enough

For the life I once had

Full of riches, treats, fluff;

Feeling happy, mad, sad.

 

Things not of your mortal world,

Are now mine to take;

In your insipid face I hurl,

 The fears you once faked!

 

I now see things for what they are;

There is no choice, no turning back.

My soul has come much too far;

Eternal thirst shows mercy's lack!

 

I never asked for ethereal thrills,

Nor suckling of blood as heart faints, then stills.

No dreams had I of immortality;

Yet,immortal I am, awash in red seas.

 

If damned I am, then damned I shall be!

Run, try to hide, no escaping from me.

I'll hold you enthralled then roll back your head

And steal your life's blood, as Queen of Undead.

 

As a Queen of the night,I shall leave but a trace,

Undeniable marks, though you'll ne'er see my face.

Man will make of the dead just what he supposes;

But e'er will wonder, "from whence came the black roses?"

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MindNumbing commented on Black Roses (Part 3) Queen of the Undead

02-16-2010

The beauty of not only accepting, but embracing :) Wonderful!

queenrosered

02/16/2010

You definitely are picking up on how this story builds....you have patience...I love that, so tired of the ADD and ADHD folks who want instant gratification, ya know? LOL! Fangs a lot! ; ) Rose!

Charlie23 commented on Black Roses (Part 3) Queen of the Undead

01-22-2010

I enjoy that each peice of the series has it's own form and direction! Nicely done!

queenrosered

01/22/2010

OK Charlie, this is part 3 and today I will post parts 4,5 and 6 so please read and enjoy as the full story unfolds, OK? I totally love that you dedicated the time and attention necessary to do any "series" of poems justice...shows dedication! Peace and Love, Rose! CD

queenrosered commented on Black Roses (Part 3) Queen of the Undead

01-21-2010

TYVM again Peery and I shall read your 2 Vampire poems then choose one for myself, OK? Yes, I will let everyone know when all 15 parts are posted! Peace and Love, Rose! XD

kpeery09 commented on Black Roses (Part 3) Queen of the Undead

01-21-2010

Very Nice, I like this alot, keep up the good work, and I know we all would love to read alot more of them when you have the time to put them up you know. No rush...but yeah I give you another 10. And well I dont know of any other titles that I would like for you to have read so you can choose for the third one.

DarknessDivine commented on Black Roses (Part 3) Queen of the Undead

01-17-2010

Once again, I am in love with this series. I would really love for you to help me with the saga if you would. Just send me a private message on here if you are willing to help. I do need help with the flow and rhyme scheme on them.

queenrosered

01/20/2010

Thanks so much Darkness! I would help if I thought I really could and if I had the time but I don't, unfortunately.I stay REALLY busy and don't even come here as often as I would like. Hope you understand. Thanks again sweetie! Love, Rose. XD

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.