BLACK ROSES (Part 6) THE MOVE

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Part 6 of Black Roses takes place right after Hurricane Katrina devastated New Orleans so what are the Vampire lovers to do? Please read and enjoy all 15 parts as they are posted and than you my frieds! Love, Rose XD

BLACK ROSES (Part 6) THE MOVE

As I arise, my spirit's light;

This feeling's most peculiar.

In dark of night, with vampire sight,

He sleeps beside, my love, LaFluer!

 

A thousand nights I dreamed revenge;

He took my life, my mortal soul!

Vanished, intentions to avenge;

Companionship and love console.

 

Awake, my love, the night is here,

And New Orleans is strangely still.

I never thought again to fear,

No Mardi Gras, nor revelry trills.

 

I see my dear, you feel it too.

We gaze about in fascination;

There's no one left, save me and you

What could have caused such devastation?

 

A mighty storm has taken all;

Katrina was the witch's name!

Her waters breached the levy's wall

This city just is not the same.

 

Where now, my love, shall we two feast?

As all New Orleans decomposes;

Across the ocean, we'll fly east

Londoners...beware black roses!

 

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MindNumbing commented on BLACK ROSES (Part 6) THE MOVE

02-16-2010

You've gained a fan, Rose... I'm truly eager to read the other parts of this... You've done a wonderful job!

queenrosered

02/16/2010

Once more, Mind, its wonderful to know that my story is being read. This is the only "series" I have ever attempted and its sometimes very difficult to grab readers hard enough, in the first part, to get them to continue the "journey", so I hope you will read the rest (I posted all the rest of them today!) plus, please...spread the word, OK? Let people know that if they will patiently read one after the other, they will have a complete story, with a beginning, a middle and a real ending, lol...ya know? Thanks! Love, Rose! XD

Insideme commented on BLACK ROSES (Part 6) THE MOVE

02-16-2010

I love the way you incorporated history into your writing, that to me alwyas gives a persons work a realistic tone.

queenrosered

02/16/2010

I owe you even more now Lynx! Thanks again sweetie! Love, Rose! XD

queenrosered

02/17/2010

OOPS Sorry Inside, I mistakenly called you by the wrong name...it won't happen again! (embarrassed) lol....thanks again! Rose, XD

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.