Black Roses (series) Part 1 of 15 part Vampire series.
In this darkened, stench-filled room, My fate is sealed within this tomb Nevermore to see sun's rise, Tears of blood now fill these eyes. Once passing fair and filled with life, This coffin's now my bed till night. Oh,sunlight, mortal enemy! I curse the night this came to be! I saw in shadows dark and dim, Mysterious intrigue and followed him. Drawn against my will I went; This evil demon,was hell-sent! I quivered in delightful spasms; Experienced such sweet orgasms. A new day dawns as coffin closes; Left alone with twelve black roses. Doomed to walk this earth alone, My thirst for blood now begs me roam. Fear not, my friends, in sweet repose; I'll give you death, and.. one.. black.. rose.Black Roses (series) Part 1 of 15 part Vampire series.
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This is only part 1 of 15 so please...if you like it, make sure to read every one of them, as it does tell a story, in poetic form. Thanks and please, enjoy! :)
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MindNumbing commented on Black Roses (series) Part 1 of 15 part Vampire series.
02-16-2010
- Great flow and the story has already hooked me, since I'm an avid vampire junkie ;) I'm off the read the rest... good job on this one!
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02/16/2010
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Charlie23 commented on Black Roses (series) Part 1 of 15 part Vampire series.
01-22-2010
- Have diffenetly caught my attention to make me wanna read the series! The fact that you write on so many topics and levels speaks high of your talent!
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01/22/2010
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kpeery09 commented on Black Roses (series) Part 1 of 15 part Vampire series.
01-21-2010
- Very Nice, I like this..I'll start reading part 2 and then 3 right away. Rating=10, My Vampire poem story has only two parts to it heres the first title Vampire Ritual-part 1
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01/21/2010
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koolmom0 commented on Black Roses (series) Part 1 of 15 part Vampire series.
01-16-2010
- Veyr nice! It is written very well, looking forward to reading parts 2 and 3. Kool
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01/16/2010
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Sydney commented on Black Roses (series) Part 1 of 15 part Vampire series.
01-16-2010
- wow. this really dark and fantastic of the vampiric world.
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01/16/2010
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