black roses

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black roses

with the plain sight of agony
a mind filled with fear
i called your name aloud
but you didnt even hear
a deathly love
a burning passion
you said you'd save me
but i saw no action

the screams of the inocent rage upon the walls
im marching on or so it seems
a plague confides us
destroying all your dreams

fear drives us isane
but hate kills us all
dont let the world consume us and surely it wll fall
the end is near
your life you fear
terror days surround you
a swift death you hear

black roses flying your enemies now dying
thorns puncture their souls
petals taking its toll
condeming the dead and damnng their sould
a strike from lightning had frozen him cold

a child blood red from the fright
walks alone in the night
plans his revenge with a mind filled with hate

cant take back his actions or the things he's said
his only satisfaction is to see you dead
with the twist of a knife he takes away your life
but he still feels empty inside

so he drags your corpse away
to the grave where you'll stay
till the end of all this time
and when the deed is done
and after his revenge
he'll hold the beast inside
try not to kill again

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jess7693 commented on black roses

05-21-2011

your poem reminds me how you can seek justice and in the end crave the thrill and adrenaline in the dark act i love your poem and that is rare for me

Jelani159

05/27/2011

thank you very much. the poem was inspired by a poem a poem that one of my ex-bandmates wrote

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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