black water

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black water

it's crazy how this can make you feel
it's insane how people can ever leave
or the it is the fact that they don't fall in
how can they not fall in
fall in to this place where peace is around you
but the peace haves it price
like it always dones
this place will take you
it will eat you
it will use you
and it will give you everthing
this water
this darkness
it really can intoxicant you
it cares for you
it loves you
but
but how do people leave this place...
this place of forever peace...
how do you leave...
how do you leave these arms

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trets commented on black water

06-30-2009

wow! I seriously just fell in love with this poem! i had no idea that last line was coming up. that was great honestly great work

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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