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Ode to Vanessa - My pride and joy, my loving daughter ........... This poem won the Weekly Contest in Sept '09 and is published in the first "Original Poetry Anthology".

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I am a blank page ...
nothing enscribed - nothing stained.
I am clear - a story untold,
Free of sin - an unblemished soul. 

Free of hatred - free of pain,
Nothing given and all to gain 
I am love - simple and pure, 
Just who I am? I am not sure.

I am a blank page ... 
Nothing torn - nothing strained.
I am new -  for I know not,
I only know what I am taught

Free of  knowledge- free of spite,
Know nothing of what's wrong or right.
Free of anger - Free of fear,
I only know that I am here.

I am a blank page ...
So please, write me with a purposeful hand.
Instill all of your best qualities,
So that I may become the best that I can.

I am love - simple and pure,
Just who I am? I am not sure.

I am a blank page


                 
                                                                            KjK
                                                                            092009






























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cutbanksam commented on Blank Page

02-20-2011

A nice poem showing the desire to be fulfilled with love and HOPE.

knight4696

02/21/2011

Thsnks Cutbanksam! :) I appreciate the read and review. I am rarely on this site anymore ... Most of us poets are now on wattpad.com You may want to think about signing up there if you haven't already. I have been told that this site is going to disban sometime in March. Thanks again, Ken

carynontherhine commented on Blank Page

10-02-2010

Wow Knight, I had come for a visit and scrolling down your poem page I happend to notice the high number on this one. This is definite well done and could only come from immense talent! I loved it and enjoyed every word. Yes, a blank page. Know all to well, right? You always amaze me! Ten plus from me. Hugz

knight4696

10/05/2010

Thank you very much Caryn! :) I appreciate the read and comments very much. You humble me so!! Thanks again my friend! :) Ken

BringMeBullets commented on Blank Page

01-28-2010

Wonderful! I admire all your comments. lol The most I have on one poem is like...6. And three of them are mine! xD Great write. It's beautiful.

knight4696

01/28/2010

lol! Thanks BMB! :) It actually won a weekly contest and is now published in the new OP anthology. That is the reason this poem received so many comments, :) I'll be happy to check out some of your work too. Thanks for the read and comments! :) Ken

am2anangel commented on Blank Page

01-28-2010

and yet another great write; so true how newborns are just a blank page and we should be cautious on just how we fill their chapters of life. I noticed one correction I think you meant know not no in the line; "no nothing that's wrong or right" or maybe I'm reading it wrong. regardless another great one.

knight4696

01/28/2010

Thanks Angel, One of those words that don't get picked up buy spell check. Man, This one is published in the New OP book .. I hope I submitted it with "know" or the editors caught it. Funny, it won a weekly contest - has a multitude of comments and not one of them mentioned this error. Damn! good eye! :) Thanks for pointing it out and for your comments! :) Ken

Savant commented on Blank Page

12-26-2009

Great work Knight. I am a first time father and there was nothing like seeing my son born. I was filled with so much hope for him and his life. Sad thing is that depending on circumstances, some people saw their children as curses and punishment for sin. They saw them as imminent headaches and frustration but the truth is when they get here, they are just as you described here. Thanks for the reminder.

knight4696

12/26/2009

Thanks Savant! I appreciate your comments. What you say is true. Terribly sad, but an unfortunate truth. The thing that bothers me most .. is that the child didn't ask to be born. They were brought into the world from either a loving union or because of a few minutes os selfish sexual gratification. I think that they are a blessing and need to be handled with care. They are like a sandcastle, left unattended, they can be trampled and washed away. But with few touch ups, we can build a moat to protect them and they will stand on their own for a very long time. Thanks again for your comments. Much appreciated.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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