bleed

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  • Angst
    • dragongarcia
    • Losing everything I loved but trying to keep going

    Poem Commentary

    when i felt the pain of not wanting to be anymore

    bleed

    I cut, I bleed

    As that blade cuts my skin

    I feel good, I am free

    But yet I hurt inside

    My heart is broken

    My soul is shattered

    Blood, rolls down my hand

    I start to feel numb

    I want to die

    I want to be free

    I a, cold, I am tired

    There is blood surrounding me

    Slowly draining my life

    I am alone, so alone

    No one cares, they never did

    With my last bit of strength

    I write “I loved him till the end’

    I cant see no more

    Darkness now holds me

    I am free of hurt

    Free of living

    Free to never bleed again

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    Elke commented on bleed

    06-17-2013

    A little too close for comfort. Can't hardly say it is a 'lovely' poem, but I can relate completely. There was a time when you were me.

    dragongarcia

    06/17/2013

    thank you, i was in a dark time of my life between family and the man i loved.

    Populous commented on bleed

    01-11-2011

    this was very visual...i loved the way it tells a story

    dragongarcia

    01/13/2011

    thank you. i was feelin down and i was reading a sad love story when i wrote this.

    Ash212 commented on bleed

    03-03-2010

    How verry sad. I can relate. : ) I mostly enjoyed this part: I am alone, so alone "No one cares, they never did With my last bit of strength I write “I loved him till the end’ I cant see no more" I really enjoyed it.

    dragongarcia

    03/15/2010

    its how i felt when me and my baby's dad were on some rocky grounds.

    inkmaster commented on bleed

    02-03-2010

    This one cuts deep..A nice write I enjoyed the verse you put down..A little on the dark side, but nothing wrong with that ,~,Inkmaster~...........

    dragongarcia

    02/11/2010

    thank you. its always up and down when it comes to my poetry. but its how i felt at the time i wrote it.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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