Bleeding for you

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Bleeding for you

Gently sweeping o'er my skin
Sliceing out the pain within
Dripping memorys thick and thin
Curseing your name again and again 
Letting go of all the sorrow
Youll find me dead on the morrow

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Laila commented on Bleeding for you

12-25-2011

so young and you seems to have gone through so much pain

Solaris

01/09/2012

quite a bit actually read some more especially the one called Daddy It's Ok

xXLoveHurtsXx commented on Bleeding for you

07-19-2011

*tear* I absolutely adore it. Thank you. You were right, I can definately relate to it.

Solaris

07/20/2011

your welcome darlin and thanks for the comment

girlygirl1234 commented on Bleeding for you

07-13-2011

wow...for a small poem like this there is alot of emotional toll in it and i like it. very impressing

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Solaris’s Poems (22)

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Poison Drugs and Fire 0
The Letter Before The End 0
Why? 0
The Mistress 1
The Soul Seekers Sorrow 0
The Reason 3
The Demon Within 0
Your God Not Mine 4
Die 3
one more 2
Bleeding for you 3
A Forever Love 1
The Secret Pain I Hide 2
Daddy It's OK 3
I wish For Death 4
These My Darkest Days 2
The Dreamer's Dream 10
Why are you Gone 10
Sarah 4
Feel It In The Wind 10
Losing You I Lost Myself 12
Time and Death Go A Whoring 15