Blood Tears

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This is one of my new one's I wrote on 9-28-2010.

Blood Tears

Blood Tears make my blue eye's Dark Red,
Full of Anger and Torture, Questions and Doubt.
No fear of death, trying to lose my last breath!
I was forced in, Now I want out!
My Tears of Blood Flow endlessly.
Both my Eyes Bleed Uncontrollably.
Just wanting a chance and a change...
I need some hope and success in this game!
A long time comin', A Strong Unwanted Breakdown.
Blood Tears Fall heavy to the Ground:(
No Way around it; The Blood Tears just Fall...
Bloody and Heavy, My Blue Eye's Raw.
Waiting so Impatiently for them to quit!
I'm so sick of the Past and the Injustice!
I need help and comfort from A Best Friend, A man,
Just an ounce of happiness and love with a hug and a kiss..
My Blue Eyes are Red and Blood Shot.
Failure, Anger and Loneliness is all I Got..
I need Hope from the Devil's Joke,
My Blood Tears are Far from Near:(... 
Please, I'm tired and alone..
Someone help me here just send me home!!

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REGINA2 commented on Blood Tears

10-22-2010

A good write. I wrote a similar one called tears of blood but took it off the website a while ago. I feel your pain, for I live with it every day.

Worthless

10/22/2010

Thanks. but maybe you should put it back on for us to read. It seems we are inspired by other's words to write what sometime's we or others don't see... Thank you for the rating and comment.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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