bloody hell

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bloody hell

Oh bloody hell, it came so soon..

Hit me around the break of noon..

Should have know, this chocolate craving

And I’ve been ranting and raving

Heightened senses, smell and sight

And the fucking urge to fight

Nauseous, cramping, feeling sick

Seven days slowly tick

Another month, it came again

Lucky bastards, fucking men

They know not this hell I feel

Or the weakness of this pill

Just the swinging of my mood

How I’m nice, then so rude

So bipolar, ups and downs

Fighting battles, endless rounds

Shooting pains, my aching back

Once provoked, I’ll attack

All curled up in this ball

Snot and tears as they fall

Nothing good I think of this

Or the fear, a month to miss

Just the pain of really knowing

That inside no one’s growing

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Hiporlacking commented on bloody hell

08-29-2010

I dug this. Definitely a topic few choose to write about haha.

dahlusion commented on bloody hell

01-21-2010

Your gut wrenching pain comes through the screen and lands in my lap, and looms like a dark raging sea. Bravo!

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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