Bloody Suicide

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Bloody Suicide

A cold dark force of PAIN devours,
His soul, his life, his final hours.
Death awaits at the end he knows,
But this strange understanding; Nowhere to go.
Hiding beneath stars, a cold dark void.
The existence of nothing-- abandoned little boy.
Crying for assistance. No one hears.
Too busy to notice the cold dark tears.
Awaiting a spark of light in his life,
he hides his PAIN, with the beauty of a knife.
Crying, Writing, Screaming, he tears,
Open his heart, if only someone was there.
A bright white room, enclosed all around,
he lies in the center of the cold dark ground.
Heaven or Hell? It seems simple to decide.
But what is the outcome, A BLOODY SUICIDE??

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Gracey commented on Bloody Suicide

07-15-2009

I liked this a lot. I thought the ending was powerful but my favourite like was "Awaiting a spark of light in his life, he hides his PAIN, with the beauty of a knife."

bforibus commented on Bloody Suicide

01-23-2009

definitely loved the reds and blacks in this picture. very good read

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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