Blossoms

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    Blossoms

     Blossoms

    Showy blossoms
    pink and fair
    scent-caress
    a springtime air
    at the sun's touch
    opening wide
    sweetly blushing
    as a bride
    blossoms, blossoms
    I confess
    such perfect trust
    few possess...

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    Oblaidon commented on Blossoms

    11-17-2009

    I like this one. Nice metaphore for trust. I give it a 10!
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    bloomingsun

    11/17/2009

    Thank you! So glad you liked it.

    kmooney commented on Blossoms

    11-17-2009

    Marvelous, simply marvelous. I love the simplicity and complexitiy of this one. Very light and fun to read. I love the springtime as all God's beauty comes to life. There nothing more beautiful than witnessing a sleeping garden suddenly blossoming everywhere. I have one called Overture of Spring that you might enjoy. If you read it, note that it is an acrostic (the first letters of every line form a phrase). Thanks so much for sharing.... Kevin
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    bloomingsun

    11/17/2009

    Thank you for your gracious comments! I am so glad you enjoyed it. I will check out your suggestions asap.

    mamasan commented on Blossoms

    11-16-2009

    Nice words and so descriptive that I could see the and drink in the scent from their blushing pink leaves. A brief passage that turned out perfection in the form of a blossom.
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    bloomingsun

    11/16/2009

    Thank you for reading and for your kind comment. I appreciate it. Glad you enjoyed it.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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