Blue Moon Song

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Blue Moon Song

Blue moon-
wolf spirt hear me;
I cry to you
in this bleak
and void filled wonderings:
guide my lost soul
brother wolf-
free me from
this and redeem
all within,
which faded away;
I do not wish
to walk alone.
Intertwined-
this peace of mind-
a gift we may share
beneath the light
of the blue moon.

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Tempestlady commented on Blue Moon Song

11-05-2011

OOh! This one is good! Loved the pic and the word play. Well done, write on.....................Tlady

cutbanksam commented on Blue Moon Song

11-03-2011

You wrote this with just the right tone to describe the wolf and/or yourself. Great job.

Hampton commented on Blue Moon Song

08-27-2009

This poem contains an earthy and spiritual essence that captures the reader and holds their attention through to the poem's end. Excellent.

Milkman commented on Blue Moon Song

08-21-2009

Nice piece of imagery...using the wolf (a very loyal and social animal) to express Your (everyones) desire for belonging and companionship to be redeemed from "this bleak and void filled wondering"...good writing

ripper commented on Blue Moon Song

08-21-2009

Well done. Like if some one read born free and then said then what, this is the answer to that question... nicely done, and your poems have a cadence and rhythm that make them uniquely yours I like the familiarity

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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