BLUES (acrostic) (c) Copyright 2009
Buried my heart in the soil of your rejectionLoveless day, lonesome night
Under the spell of misery
Every silent chord you play
Speaks volumes.
(c) Copyright 2009 Melanie D. West
BLUES (acrostic) (c) Copyright 2009
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(submitted for Daily Poetry Challenge 6.15.09 on originalpoetry.com forums in thread "Let's play the blues")Loveless day, lonesome night
Under the spell of misery
Every silent chord you play
Speaks volumes.
(c) Copyright 2009 Melanie D. West
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poetress77 commented on BLUES (acrostic) (c) Copyright 2009
05-10-2011
- good job again, I like your style and very easy to follow
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08/31/2011
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MalikPeterson commented on BLUES (acrostic) (c) Copyright 2009
03-13-2010
- You are very good at the acrostic pieces...I sure can really see this being the true meaning behind the blues. Good job...I say good job...and after that...I hand you these kudos :)
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03/13/2010
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Karma885 commented on BLUES (acrostic) (c) Copyright 2009
02-22-2010
- i have poem simulare to urs... i liked it...and so like my poems i feel ur emoution
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02/22/2010
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cmlestrade commented on BLUES (acrostic) (c) Copyright 2009
02-11-2010
- This poem says so much in just a few lines. It is so straightforward and captures the love lost and the sadness of rejection,
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02/13/2010
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Niecy commented on BLUES (acrostic) (c) Copyright 2009
12-12-2009
- OOoh so Blue the Whispered Truth! Your work, your style is so inviting to read! NAMASTE!
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12/13/2009
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