Bold Love

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    Bold Love
    Bold Love
    Feeling Bold, I drew you in
    Spontaneous, not knowing even where to begin
    Our kindred souls knew how to dance
    Together, so we took a chance
    Passionate ecstasy was what we knew
    The picture of rapture was what we drew
    Never looking back to see where we stood
    Our feelings led us where they would
    They say love dies and time will tell
    If in each other's hearts we'll dwell
    -M. Jacobs

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    MarionYost commented on Bold Love

    01-19-2010

    Well, You just made your debut in my "favorites Archives". (LOL).. I LOVE THIS. Definitely a 10 and worded beautifully. All the best -Marion-
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    danmartyjake1

    01/19/2010

    It is so interesting to find out what other poets like and what they resonate with... Thank You so Much!

    nhorlandi commented on Bold Love

    01-10-2010

    This piece is really daring in any way. I like the rhymes very supportive and made each line sturdy and smooth. Well done.
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    danmartyjake1

    01/11/2010

    Daring for sure, as Bold as Love can be..... thanks for your kind words and I hope you will read my others...

    BadBadBear commented on Bold Love

    01-06-2010

    Young, impulsive love takes the path and hasty decisions are involved. Growing together will be the challenge .. to hold all together allowing this love to continue flourishing.
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    danmartyjake1

    01/07/2010

    Thanks BBBear, for all your thoughts on my poems and for being a supportive fellow poet here on OP.

    knight4696 commented on Bold Love

    01-04-2010

    Wow Marion - Brings me back to my younger yrs when love was new and exciting ... I remember those feelings as if it were yesterday .. a nice reflection ... Ken
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    danmartyjake1

    01/05/2010

    Grateful to be able to still do that with words, thank you for sharing that thoughtful comment.

    ginga commented on Bold Love

    12-31-2009

    jake, A tender love poem that is light and enduring, very happily ever afterish. ginga
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    danmartyjake1

    01/02/2010

    Thanks, Ginga, you know when we are young and free, Love comes and we surrender to it before realizing all of the things we set in motion...

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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