bonfire! :p

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    • hannahxP
    • the greatest litterary work of my life, will be the last i ever wright.

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    always inspired by the stars its amazing how many of them you dont see until you are far away from town. just a little something from a great night with friends

    bonfire! :p

    Under the star strewn country sky

    With a campfire by my side

    Pointing out the constellations

    No wondering about tomorrow’s destination

    I lost track of time

    Because time was flying in that open country sky

    But my heart is on the ground

    Cuddled up and feeling safe and sound

    Their voices seem so distant

    Why not give the silence a good hard listen

    Fire crackles, wood whistles, leaves rustle

    And in the cold night air my skin bristles

    In the privacy of me and the open air

    On that shooting star

    I make a wish, I make a dare

    Telling stories, gentle reminders of the world I chose

    From this place I can’t tell

    Is it real or am I dreaming

    Dreams always overshoot realism

    And I feel the disappointment of dreams far too often

    It must be factual

    I can feel all this wonder

    I can see the splendor of

    That star strewn country sky

    I find by and by

    That the sky is far beyond my dreams

     

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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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