Born Again


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    for your concideration

    Born Again

    Uh.....hehe, the waterhole is dusty, crusty with misdeeds and misfortune, overly villified

    Portent born of senseless acts of inane cruelty, this then is the well of disdain filled by virtue

    Reverence for passive traits of marshalled, short lived courage,            testimony to intolerance and conivery.
                                                                                                           Fortune cashes chance...s check.............favoring the well heeled heart.             Muffled retort stifled by gestalt! presumably quieting the inner storm

    whence it rears unsure that next weary time,                                         casting flame to twice burned cinders cold.

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    Bethane1978 commented on Born Again


    Its unusual for you and all over the place but great as usual.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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    rougepriest’s Poems (11)

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    A Little Thought 1
    Sympathys Dowry 1
    Chapter 34 1
    Born Again 1
    Feedback Gone Awry 0
    Contemptuous virtue 0
    Dark Screamers 22
    Last Place I Looked 7
    Deaths Tendril 9
    Gentle Dream 17