Born to You and Me

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This is inspired by my granddaughter, baby GG.

Born to You and Me

Foretold by Jewish prophesy

A baby born to you and me

Not born into a royal clan

No scepter in his little hand

 

Not regal nor of royal birth

A child comes to save all the earth

Lays where oxen and donkeys bray

In wooden bed of straw and hay

 

Wrapped in ragged cloth and threads

Shepherds did what an angel said

Wise men also were revealed a sign

A king to follow.  A light divine

 

An eastern star shown to them

The City of David, Bethlehem

They found the child Mary embraced

Through heavenly design sins erased

 

None thought from this poor beginning

To us would be born a saving king

Not upon jeweled throne he reign

His love replaces our sin and pain

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Kaleidoscope commented on Born to You and Me

05-24-2011

Wow I have been gone for quite awhile and I come back and see no one and then I read this and I can say "I truly remember why I joined this site" You are an excellent writer.. Really that is an understatement..I am at loss for words as I am in awe..I am glad I came back if just to see this one poem..Gifted

Oblaidon

05/24/2011

I am overwhelmed by your compliment. Thank you so much. -Al

countrypoet commented on Born to You and Me

01-14-2011

Al, I'm sorry that it has been a while since I've read your poems.I have been busy,but do enjoy reading your poems very much.This is an excellent poem,which beautifully retells the miracle of Christmas in your wonderfully unique and elegant style.Many blessings to you and your family in the New Year. Terry

ApaqRasgirl commented on Born to You and Me

12-30-2010

my dear friend, that was beautiful, not many other words could describe this piece, simply beautiful and I would be honored if you would consider donating it to the SnowPoets Christmas book........if you would like to please post it in the book forum and email me a signed and dated copy of it for the records and it does not matter rather it is in the contest or not........loves ya asha...a 10 all the way..........ashadi9895@gmail.com

ginga commented on Born to You and Me

12-30-2010

Oblaidon, Certainly what matters most about this sacred holiday is contained in your words. ty for the reason for the season. ginga

Oblaidon

12/30/2010

Thank you much. Happy New Year. :)

ccslim commented on Born to You and Me

12-25-2010

I like this! Simple beginnings to a grandstand venue!

Oblaidon

12/30/2010

Thanks for the comment. May God bless you. :)

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

Oblaidon’s Poems (26)

Title Comments
Title Comments
What to be 2
Pressing On 8
Born to You and Me 9
Scorched 9
Daddy’s Girl 12
In a Flash 12
Skinny Dipping 20
lf 9
Woman to Man 21
Sign of the Cross 12
Love Embraced 21
Our Biggest Threat 14
In God I Trust 10
Driving Past Graves 17
When I was a Kid. 18
Pets by our Side 8
Rocky Shores 10
A minuscule bug 14
Heart of a Poet 29
My Armor is Faith 12
For Our Troops 8
Baby Has a Name. 17
My MI 3
My Love 8
The Grace of God 13
Rhyming Poems 20