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I pray for a moment

i’m screaming out loud

god if YOU’RE out there

please help me now

 

never this low

this low before

has this life pushed me

down to the floor

 

i fell to the bottom

i crashed right on through

throw me a lifeline

show me some truth

 

show me some sunlight

give me some hope

don’t let me die here

throw me a rope

 

give me a chance

to prove it all wrong

give me the strength

to stand and walk on

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Tempestlady commented on Bottom

02-07-2011

Been there, called and got an answer. Not always the answer i wanted, but always later found out why. I would like to read a poem about what got you there in the first place. A wonder piece of work and very inspirational. Write on.....and remember, sometimes unanswered prayers and one of God's greatest gifts. ....................................Tlady

ahardwalk commented on Bottom

02-05-2011

I'm hoping you found your strength cause hitting rock bottom can take its toll on anyone beautiful write!

Teardrops commented on Bottom

02-05-2011

Your strength i s your writings they are wonderful , from the heart and great . This is a winner in any contest Marie

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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