Bowl of Race

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    Bowl of Race

    Milkshakes and mixed drinks are
    things we dont mind,but when it
    comes time to find a partner,you
    should stick to your own kind.
    The thought of being different,
    is something you may enjoy,but
    to others who see you,you come
    across as trying to annoy.
    You make walk around as to
    say,"hey look what I got,"others
    will look down on you,as their
    stomach turns to knots.
    Backgrounds and colors,this
    will always be your crutch,you
    will move through life,like
    a stickshift, without it clutch.
    Wanting to find someone who
    is of your same color,is the
    way it should be,when searching
    for that partner.
    Parties,functions,and events all
    around,it disquised me to
    see,you have chosen a problem
    to compound.
    You kiss him and touch him,
    showing others the ability to
    dig,but to onlookers,,you are
    nothing but a pig.
    White ,asian,black and latin
    too,we all have the ability to
    use these distructive tools.
    But in the end,you will ult-
    timately end up,looking
    like a fool.White,asian,latin,we
    can look at with such ease,
    but when looking at blacks,
    mixing will soon,breed
    a disease.
    This mixture is rampant,causing
    chaos within the mass,little girl
    you should know,your looked
    upon with no class.
    Your dirty and loose,with no
    morals in sight,you should be
    sent to hell,on a one-way
    flight.
    So listen up young ladies,
    stay within your own color,
    this is the process of un-
    common valor.
    Just dont be the opposite,
    chose your composite,
    this will limit your sorrows,
    and reap the benefits of
    a better tomorrow.

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    winterkou commented on Bowl of Race

    12-11-2009

    hey no offense but this comes off on me as a bit racist. Still a good poem in sense . When i get a moment ill check out more - keep writing what ya feel-

    kdarcy commented on Bowl of Race

    04-30-2009

    A poem doesn't have to good or bad, only arouse an emotion, or stir a feeling in someone. A job well done in those regards, thought provoking. I will look into some of your other work.

    xintensex

    06/26/2009

    thank you for your response,sometimes i may come across as racist,i hope that did not come through.I write what i feel.we all have different outlooks on things.this was my feeling...i have friends and know individuals who have lived by this poem..i wanted to write a piece about it.

    Paradice21 commented on Bowl of Race

    11-20-2008

    I am Curious to know your race. Did you encounter a problem dating someone outside your nationality or someone else that you know. Thsi poem was good, deep but yet kinda distrubing. Just a Curious soul and Mind. Great work with your writing.

    xintensex

    06/26/2009

    I am italian,yes!,i know people who have encountered this..or live by this.If 2 people love each other.it should not matter what color they are..I am with a woman now who is outside my race.i am happy,my family is happy.I hope i dont come across racist...it is what it is...thank you for your remarks,i appreciate it...

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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