BRAD'S BALLAD(SGT BRAD WENTZ WHO DIED IN IRAQ)

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BRAD'S BALLAD(SGT BRAD WENTZ WHO DIED IN IRAQ)

`Twas a day just like any other
Waiting for some news out of Iraq.
When it came, it engulfed and smothered
Young Brad would soon be coming back.

At first it sounds quite good
A soldier's coming home at last;
Though traveling in a box of wood
With handles made of shiny brass.

Sound the trumpet, strike the drum;
A funeral dirge the band will play.
Sergeant Brad Wentz did succumb
To injuries sustained upon this day.

A little girl has lost her Dad
A wife has lost her lover.
A soldier gone is always sad
Be he husband, son or brother.

When duty called he packed his bags
He kissed his family goodbye.
Now all they have are dog tags and a flag
Is it any wonder they still cry?

Life goes on in his small town
The clocks are still all ticking
His family's world is upside-down
His headstone they are picking.

If he had been some Senator's son,
Would his life be sacrificed?
The working class hero is the one
That always pays the dearest price.

This warrior's heart is free to roam,
Above the clouds, beyond the fray.
Although his body rests at home,
His soul is with the Lord this day.

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Insideme commented on BRAD'S BALLAD(SGT BRAD WENTZ WHO DIED IN IRAQ)

01-22-2010

You are on fire with this one, I can see that this one came from "that place". I hope you never stop writing because you my friend are a true inspiration.

queenrosered

01/22/2010

Thanks again Inside.....I can't believe I missed you prior to this.I look forward to reading many more of your works and vive versa!! Peace and Love, Rose. XD

koolmom0 commented on BRAD'S BALLAD(SGT BRAD WENTZ WHO DIED IN IRAQ)

01-21-2010

This is a beautiful write Queen. It brought tears to my eyes. Kool

queenrosered

01/21/2010

Thanks so very much Kool! Yes, the men and women in service to our nation should always be honored, in life, as well as in death. Thanks again, Peace and Love, Rose! XD

Mandi commented on BRAD'S BALLAD(SGT BRAD WENTZ WHO DIED IN IRAQ)

01-21-2010

Very good joob on the Ballad for Brad It is very sad. Was he related or a friend or relative This was very well written, for in- memorium. He will long in infamy via this ballad.

queenrosered

01/21/2010

Thanks Mandi! No, Brad is real and a poet friend online knew him and when Brad died, she asks those that wanted to, to send a poem for Brad to her and she compiled them and gave them to his family.I never heard more, so I assume they have it.Thanks again, we must never forget those who serve. Love Ya, Rose! XD

Rodcen commented on BRAD'S BALLAD(SGT BRAD WENTZ WHO DIED IN IRAQ)

01-21-2010

Very wonderful .... This poem is well structured and makes a very clear picture.... Kudos

queenrosered

01/21/2010

Thanks so much Rod, really appreciate the read dude....we can all relate, Im sure..sad...but all too real, thanks! Peace and Love, Rose! XD

SuperChick76 commented on BRAD'S BALLAD(SGT BRAD WENTZ WHO DIED IN IRAQ)

01-21-2010

This actually did bring a tear to my eyes, That doesn't happen to me often. It was brilliantly written, and I agree with dumplin, it deserves to be published. Brilliant poem.

queenrosered

01/21/2010

Thanks so much Super....it will be published in my next book. I didnt know Brad personally but friend of mine did....was very sad. Thanks, Peace and Love, Rose. XD

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