Break Me Free Brother Wind

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Break Me Free Brother Wind

Whispering wind
lift me up-
carry me beyond;
in this I cannot
stand alone.
Reaches
of space and time,
beyond mortal conception;
I know not
what awaits me.
Diffuse thy self-
mortality's lie:
do we ever truly live:
can we ever truely die?
My soul only seeks
freedom from this-
my distasteful existence.

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stellar commented on Break Me Free Brother Wind

12-11-2009

Oh...this is a poem made out of depression when we fell that release would be good..we call for the wind to fly off from the wind...But feelings come and go,,...Wish u read "my plea" well the same thought again...

stellar

12/11/2009

fly out of earth i mean

kochab commented on Break Me Free Brother Wind

08-17-2009

provokes many thoughts blu. I like the work a great deal. Like it so that it will go to my favorites list that is. the lines Diffuse thy self- mortality's lie: do we ever truly live: can we ever truely die? go to say a lot. both seemingly certanty and uncertainty all the same in my mind. great work dear.

rougepriest commented on Break Me Free Brother Wind

08-17-2009

cool youve captured the age old mystery of all that is in a short well constructed piece, nicely done bluewolf, I feel that way too the older i get

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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