Break Me Free Brother Wind

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    Break Me Free Brother Wind

    Whispering wind
    lift me up-
    carry me beyond;
    in this I cannot
    stand alone.
    Reaches
    of space and time,
    beyond mortal conception;
    I know not
    what awaits me.
    Diffuse thy self-
    mortality's lie:
    do we ever truly live:
    can we ever truely die?
    My soul only seeks
    freedom from this-
    my distasteful existence.

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    stellar commented on Break Me Free Brother Wind

    12-11-2009

    Oh...this is a poem made out of depression when we fell that release would be good..we call for the wind to fly off from the wind...But feelings come and go,,...Wish u read "my plea" well the same thought again...
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    stellar

    12/11/2009

    fly out of earth i mean

    kochab commented on Break Me Free Brother Wind

    08-17-2009

    provokes many thoughts blu. I like the work a great deal. Like it so that it will go to my favorites list that is. the lines Diffuse thy self- mortality's lie: do we ever truly live: can we ever truely die? go to say a lot. both seemingly certanty and uncertainty all the same in my mind. great work dear.
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    rougepriest commented on Break Me Free Brother Wind

    08-17-2009

    cool youve captured the age old mystery of all that is in a short well constructed piece, nicely done bluewolf, I feel that way too the older i get
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    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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