Break

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Break

 you want a break

From some kind of  certain fate

I smother you

Forbid  I do

You say you don’t even blog

Any more

You blaming me

For you not blogging

You said you loved me

Was that just a lie?

Or am I just a fly by

You’re a selfish person

That uses excuses

To pave your road

of self gratification

 leaves me in the dark

With blue sky in the night

Light of day

Bring me

Delight

Thank you for shining in my night of day

Makes it bearable

Till the break

 

 

break

 

 

 

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ApaqRasgirl commented on Break

09-17-2010

wow that was a very strong emotion filled write.....you told it so well and your words flowed very nice......love asha

knight4696 commented on Break

09-07-2010

Blue - What an emotional piece. The pic you chose for this is perfect as well .. I felt tis one. I love how you included your pen-name in the poem ... very creative! :) Ken

bluskyinthenite

09/17/2010

Ken thank you very much for reading my writes.. very much apprecitated.. thanks again.. god bless

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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Love Lost 1
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