Breath

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    came up with this in my english class while i was bored

    Breath

    In
    the world burns
    and falls away
    before your very eyes
                                                                                  Out
    the sities fall
    to rubble and
    the children scream
    and scream, and scream
    In
    find the life
    inside you to
    keep running from
    your past
                                                                               Out
    find the soul
    within you to
    make the right decisions
    In
    can you feel
    it coming?
                                                                               Out
    can you keep
    on running?
    In
    running out
                                                                               Out
    of breath
    In
    now you find
                                                                               Out
    your death
                                                                        O - u - t

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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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