Breathe

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    • jerseycrtz
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    Breathe

    darkness swirls
    rain patters
    snow flutters
    humans breathe
    the world goes round
    but yet I feel
    as if the darkness does swirl
    the rain does patter
    the snow does flutter
    but this human
    can not breathe

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    Teardrops commented on Breathe

    12-15-2009

    A wonderful discription of panic attack . It will be fine remember you are never ever alone

    jerseycrtz

    12/16/2009

    Thank you.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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