Breeze To Storm

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    Breeze To Storm

    The breeze it blows a steady flow
    Through the trees and screened window.

    The breeze it gives a gentile kiss
    To the face it is pure bliss.

    The breeze picks up and gets cold
    The clouds have now begun to fold.

    The breeze, now wind, the gusts not small,
    The thunders bang, the lightning’s awe,
    The large raindrops began to fall.

    In the distance, it is born,
    A large black v shape starts to form.
    We hear the sirens come to warn,
    To take cover from the storm.

    By Heather D. Roe

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    tinygirl commented on Breeze To Storm

    12-17-2008

    really touching poem come read some of my poems tinygirl

    JEAGLEFEATHER commented on Breeze To Storm

    12-06-2008

    A very good & well written poem. I wished it were longer, but it is ur poem & its length is built upon ur perception & inspiration. Thank you for sharing. Please view my page & poems. Urs seem full of joy, whereas mine r dark. Inspiration is a free v

    rejee commented on Breeze To Storm

    12-01-2008

    You took me to a place -"A large black v shape"- that I didn't know I wanted to go.

    zastyue commented on Breeze To Storm

    12-01-2008

    aww~ i liked it~ i like rhymes~ you are very good with words~

    Phoenix9 commented on Breeze To Storm

    11-28-2008

    nice visual.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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