Spring time

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    spring in the air

    Spring time

    When the sun meets
    the ground in spring
    I know what that means
    The birds will be singing
    and flying around our town
    The flowers will be blooming
    all colors and styles
    We all can enjoy them for a while

    The trees will be blooming and
    and sprouting their leaves
    What a lovely picture of spring

    We can smell the rain in April
    that is pure as can be

    It helps our precious flowers
    get the rain they need
    In may the flowers are growing 
    so vibrantly
    The grass turns a color of green
    what a beautiful scene

    With the smell of spring in the air
    nothing compares
    I wish Spring would stick around
    all year


    armymom1025

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    ginga commented on Spring time

    04-01-2010

    mom, uplifting, full of joy and hope and beauyt. ginga

    armymom1025

    04/02/2010

    Thank you so much

    armymom1025

    04/05/2010

    thank you so much for taking the time to read my poem

    armymom1025

    04/17/2010

    thank you so much for reading my poem. you really have some great poems as well and alot of people on here do

    pfr717 commented on Spring time

    03-28-2010

    Poetry written about the newness of life always fascinates me, the more passion used to describe it, the more I appreciate it. You've captured the description ver well.

    armymom1025

    03/29/2010

    Thank you so much it is very nice of you to read my poems and take the time to comment! You are a very good writer too!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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