BRING THEM HOME

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DEDICATED TO THE HURT I HAD IN THE PAST

BRING THEM HOME

I WISH I COULD BE THEIR TO WIPE AWAY THEIR TEARS,
I WISH I COULD BE THEIR TO TAKE AWAY THEIR FEARS,
I KNOW HOW SCARED THEY MUST BE,
IN THEIR HEARTS DO THEY REALLY HATE ME,
I THINK ABOUT THEM ALL THE TIME,
I CAN'T WAIT FOR THEIR CALL TO SAY THEY ARE FINE,
OH
 MY HEART BREAKS MORE AND MORE EVERYDAY,
PLEASE DEAR JESUS BRING THEM HOME SHOW ME THE WAY!

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christy73 commented on BRING THEM HOME

02-12-2010

it could be about the war to never thought about it that way ....huh...cool..ty

christy73 commented on BRING THEM HOME

02-12-2010

ty for your feed back...it was about my kids i lost them over my selfish ways (drugs) a long time ago ,but i got them back a couple of years ago to ....just alot of heartaches back then...ty

kage commented on BRING THEM HOME

02-11-2010

not sure what this is about i thought maybe soldiers in the war ? but anyway it is good and well thought out nice wording

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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R.I.P. MY ADDICTION 0
TRUSTING YOUR FAITH 0
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REGRETS 2
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WHO IS SHE....... 2
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