Broken Dreams

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    • Annabear
    • in vegas tryin to get married to the man i love

    Broken Dreams

    As children bring
    their broken toys
    With tears for us to mend,
    I brought my broken dreams
    to god
    because was my friend.

    But then instead
    of leaving Him
    In peace to work alone,
    I hung around
    and tried to help
    with ways that were my own.

    At last I snatched them back
    and cried,"How could you be so slow"-
    "My child,"He said,
    "What could I do?
    You never did let go."

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    Kitra commented on Broken Dreams

    06-04-2009

    Now, that is well said and written. I absolutely love it. We have got to lear to let go and let God in order for him to work things out! AWESOME- a few grammatical errors,(because HE was my friend) but for the most part, this is an awesome poem.

    Sissy commented on Broken Dreams

    05-29-2009

    This is well beyond your years. It was very thought provoking and I found it soul reaching . You have a gift and it shows. Sissy

    Annabear

    06/02/2009

    thanx for the comment and ive had quit a few experiences for my age that i had to remember this poem.

    tinkbabey commented on Broken Dreams

    05-13-2009

    i like this one. its good. wish god can fix broken hearts...

    nanoboy909 commented on Broken Dreams

    12-23-2008

    this one is a nice one....

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

    Annabear’s Poems (18)

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    Broken Dreams 5
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    Roses 1 0
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    I hate ! 0
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    Kissing is a habit 5
    Love is like a lamp of God 0