Broken Heart

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Broken Heart

I’m falling apart,
My heart screams for me to pick up the pieces,
But I just cant,
because with each glance at every broken shard,
The tears stream from my bloodshot eyes,
And I cant see the path in front of me anymore,
Im dying,
To see the light,
Im dying,
To feel real emotions,
Not the ones I allow myself to feel,
Im dying,
To find ‘the one’ who is supposedly out there,
Although im convinced he’ll just break my heart,
And rip the band-aid off of it,
Because they know that’s all that’s holding me together.

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sammia commented on Broken Heart

06-22-2009

this is very good, its also sad....I do know what your talking about. I have went through what your saying in this poem...very good

kmeadows commented on Broken Heart

06-22-2009

I really like this. I can feel what you are trying to portray. I like the fact that you didnt force a rhyme here, it would not have done it justice. Its great the way it is. Heartfelt and sincere. Great job!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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Given Up 1
Idk 1
Emotional Roller Coaster 2
Headache 3
Momma 1
Strength 1
Army For The Heart 3
Angst 2
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Sick Feeling 5
Untitled One 1
My Medication 2
Hold Me Tight 8
Inside My Pen 5
I'm the Type of Girl 8
I Hope To Make Something Of Myself 4
My Worth 3
Not Refundable 1
Lady in Waiting 7
Forever 0
Fantasies 1
Neverending Rivers of Tears 4
Broken Heart 3
Lies and Deciet 2
Done 0
The World Started Spinning Today 4
Wondering 1
Words to Fill in the Blanks 1
Because Of You 1
Love 1
Moving On 0
Karma 3
Suitcase 3
Waiting For You 0
Heart Shaped Portal 0
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Worries 6