broken lonelyness

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broken lonelyness

i dont know what i should feel
its hard to explain
im always left here to do it alone
i know im strong
to pick myself up when im knocked down
when it feels like i cant breath
the darkness trampiling on my sacred heart
of what u have given me
why do i have to give
to sacrifice over and over
dont fucken pity me
my sanity has been tooken
dont u understand
peices u break
my heart is fading
and the only light was you
but everytime i love
that part that was so strong
that wanted to spoil
that grew
that u gave
u took away again
its dark
its cold
its faded
your only a man
i cant sterotype
but i am so fed up
another fucked up scene
and i feel like
the worth of love
is a mistake
then u get me high again
and confusion has given me my share
im spun in circles
the dizzyness cant stop
i cant breath
its like a heartattack and your not saving me
do i love u
or is it just a strong feeling
because i feel the light u gave me
has just faded

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Drivingczar commented on broken lonelyness

04-19-2009

Another good write!

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

jaggededge’s Poems (44)

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Blindly Fooled 0
I will let you go 1
heartless 2
the meaning of us 1
giving up 0
smile 1
given up part 2 0
the art of this urge 0
the end will be 1
I ALWAYS SAID 1
let go 2
dark world 2
the first one 2
losing you 0
through my eyes 0
the bipolar stage that i only share with u 0
MINDSET 0
confusion 2
heartache when i love you 0
lustfull seduction 1
thoughtless 0
broken lonelyness 1
this kind of sickness 1
slice these veighns to pour ur blood out 2
prisoner 1
life 0
i'm sorry 2
i know 1
daddy 0
the unsaid 0
passionate destruction 1
butterfly 0
all these lies... 1
still standing through your love 1
is it fate 2
one night stand i wish was so much more 1
god? 3
these emotions 1
your illnesses 1
the first 6 months of love 0
looking through the window -2
daddy 2
sometimes i cry 0
waiting for his love 0