BROKEN WING

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    BROKEN WING

    if i tell you how i feel
    you’ll use it against me someday
    so i won’t state my case
    i’ll be silent, it’s better that way
    when i open up to you
    you use it as mud to sling
    I’m like the bird you watch try to fly
    and instead of helping, breaking its wing
    you condemn me for being human
    for sinning just like you
    you’re to busy critiquing me
    to see the wrong that you do
    you treat me like a child
    your respect i have to earn
    you just laugh when i’m hurting
    and say it’s a lesson to learn
    you think my discontent
    is just me crying and whining
    you think i need definition
    but it’s really you that needs defining
    someday i’ll fly leaving you behind
    we’d be better off that way
    even with a broken wing
    i’d fly farther and less I’d pay

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    Bluemoonomen commented on BROKEN WING

    09-07-2009

    Hi. I was just curious about the site, keep getting emails about it so I decided to check it out. The first poem I came across was yours - Broken Wings. I absolutely love it! The only reason I joined was to leave you a comment. I'm looking forward to reading some more of your work. I am a self-taught artist, myself...used to write poetry. Anyhow, again I really like your poem. You are very talented!

    freind commented on BROKEN WING

    04-06-2009

    very well put many people. need to read this one. very good

    stormimartin commented on BROKEN WING

    04-02-2009

    Very good expression in this. These are all feelings that unfortunately we have all felt at one time or another. I really like this piece!

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

    organicchick’s Poems (28)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    THE WEDDING OF NEVER 12
    ENDING 7
    DISTORTED 9
    HUMAN 8
    CLAWING 9
    MOTH EATEN MEMORIES 5
    THE MORE YOU LOVE 4
    SUBTLE ARE THE SIGNS 5
    SHE'S LIKE SPRING 3
    MUD ON MY SHOES 5
    JUST CALL ME PAIN 9
    FAIRY TALE TOLD 3
    BITTERNESS 2
    LIFE 6
    SEED OF LIFE 6
    SECOND LOOK 4
    ICICLES 6
    LOVE DAD 3
    HANGING ON 4
    PROOF 2
    HOLD ME DEAR 2
    GOSSIP 1
    BROKEN WING 3
    A LITTLE LOVE. 4
    Your Fix. 2
    A New Season 3
    The mirror 6
    The lovely flower. 6