broken

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  • Dark Poetry

    broken
    You can't break me
    I'm already broken
    Just sewn back together
    Words that remain unspoken
    Broken hearts, broken homes
    Broken trust, broken bones
    Broken's all that I've been shown
    Broken's all I've ever known
    We've broken up
    I'm broken down
    I've broken in
    But can't break out
    Broken glass under my feet
    Broken bonds with those I meet
    Broken, still breaking
    Cold and still shaking
    Wanting, still taking
    Breaking away
    Making me stay
    I wait another day

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on broken

    07-26-2010

    I like the poem, it is dark and yet very truthful for a lot of people, me included. Keep writing.
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    am2anangel commented on broken

    05-27-2009

    i can literally feel your despair. you've reached the point where you feel there is nothing else of your spirit can be broken. very well written. I enjoyed.
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    JadedJezzabel commented on broken

    04-18-2009

    you may be broken but at least you've spoken on it.
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    mspoetris commented on broken

    03-18-2009

    Fabulous! A piece of priceless art. One of my favs.This could be cried from the mountain top, and all would listen.
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    chadallac74 commented on broken

    03-11-2009

    That was cool... catchy rhythm. 10!
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