Broken

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Broken

The clouds succumb to gravity

and i become lost.

My vision flutters

throughout the darkness.

Sonorous beating,

that of a heart,

echoes in the earth.

The moon and stars,

blind in the night,

make a cacophony of cries.

The tears' rhythm,

as they hit cold flesh,

is a sweet cadence.

Constant tearing,

of my dermal suit,

releases the pressure.

The everlasting life

now flows freely.

Raucous stomping

resonates in the stagnant air.

Brutality pounds,

our ears bleed,

and the ground is shattered.

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ayyan commented on Broken

02-17-2010

Very nice writing about nature and human heart in a poetic way which has touched my mind

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

Tony’s Poems (79)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Escape 0
Simplicity 1
Unser Leben....Our Life 0
Nie...Never 0
Freedom 0
Recoil 0
Du & Me 0
Lass Uns Rennen....Let Us Run 0
Menschen...Hu
mans
0
Wiederholung.
..Repitition
0
Balance 0
Finality 1
Zusammen...To
gether
0
Für Dich....For You 1
Mein Geist....My Mind 0
Uns.....Us 0
Fall......Fal
l
0
Falschen Anschuldigung
en...False Accusations
0
Sicherheit...
Safety
0
Brech Aus...Break Out 0
Shadow 0
Cold 0
Certitude 0
Truth 0
Consciousness 0
Sacrifice 0
Two Become One 0
Sleep 0
Broken 1
Punishment 0
Reality 0
Warranted Infliction 0
Sky 1
Solitude 0
Future 0
Lies 0
Rules 1
Unavoidable 0
Empty 0
Maze 0
Alone 0
Sporadic 0
Struggle 0
Impossible 0
Ambush 0
Life's Song 0
Geh....Go 0
Nicht Mehr.......No More 0
"Gods" 1
Wonders 0
Das Ende.....The End 0
Vengance 0
Obstacle 0
Gone 0
Ewigkeit....E
ternity
0
Release 0
Hidden 2
Incapable 1
Breakdown 1
Guardian Soldiers 1
One Who Once Was 0
Creative Process 0
What Am I? 1
The Overpowering Desire 5
Spirit 1
Insanity 2
Constantly 1
Present Existence 5
Pain Inside 1
Liebe.... Love 1
Banning Books 3
Iron Man 0
What You Do 2
Someone 9
IDK 6
Deprivation 12
In Return 3
Identity 3
It 5