brokenhearted11 :Her Poetry

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brokenhearted11 :Her Poetry

My friends, a young poet by the name
of brokenhearted11 thinks she's not that great
a writer sometimes.

I happen to think her work is fantastic,
especially since she's only TWELVE!!

Please read a poem of two of hers and
let her know what you think, she could use
a pick me up, I think.

Thanks bunches,
angelchaser

http://www.originalpoetry.com/poet/brokenhearted11

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killingP13 commented on brokenhearted11 :Her Poetry

02-11-2011

yet again your friendliness redirects me to another great poet and for that i thank you so much!

angelchaser

02/12/2011

She's one of my favorites on this site and I personally think she's a better poet than I, though she disagrees.

brokenhearted11 commented on brokenhearted11 :Her Poetry

02-05-2011

awh shucks(: haha thanks man. you know you're the greatest.

angelchaser

02/05/2011

Thank you, sweetheart. I happen to think you're the greatest poet to be so young that I've ever read. :)

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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