BRYAN & DEE FAHRIG

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My parents met  in 1961 at the Herman Sons Dance Hall in San Antonio Texas.  Married 9/2/1961.  They have three beautiful daughters, and many happy years.  A poem to celebrate your love.  Happy Anniversary Mom and Dad. 

BRYAN & DEE FAHRIG

At a Paul Jones in 1960 was the start,
at the HermanSons Hall she stole his heart.
Her twenty told Adolph Hoffner when to stop
Ooh! He was handsome and a cotton top.

It starts with a soft shoe, or a boogie beat
he twirls her around up out of her seat,
off they go to the smooth dance floor
he pulls her in, to throw her out once more.

He smiles, she radiates, all so natural,
the two step, the jitterbug, having a ball!
So fluid and together like poetry in motion,
Number 9 was his favorite love potion.

About ten years later, it would be,
back at the dance hall he and she.
Me and my two sisters all around their feet
happy and singing to the country beat.
Then he'd pick us up, daughters all three
and a dancing family we would be!

Baby sister on his shoulders, us on each hip,
mom had his hand and could still get a dip.
He'd spin us all around as if we were one,
I can't remember ever having so much fun!

Sore feet, out of breath, on into the night
never remember them ever having a fight.
Dancer's move back, some room to give
Encore! More! for them to dance is to live!!!

The smells were "Charles of the Ritz",
and "Old Spice",
it used to blend so very nice.
The Texas Tophands were the band
that first night that he took her hand.

That's how she hooked him, she would say,
bribed a whistler, to look her way,
blew the whistle, so that he would stop
and be her partner, spin her like a top!

He's been her partner now for 48 years
had her hand through laughter and tears.
As their daughter I just wanted to say,
Happy Anniversary! Have a wonderful day.
 

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devaamido commented on BRYAN & DEE FAHRIG

02-20-2011

What a beautiful nostalgic piece. It rings authenticity from the heart. What's not to like?

Tempestlady

02/21/2011

Thanks so much, i worked hard on it and had some fun with it. Write on....................Tlady

Grito commented on BRYAN & DEE FAHRIG

11-15-2009

It is a dance in the tune of life that enthralls and unites in a family and a beight light, grest anniversary poem!!!

Tempestlady

11/21/2009

My Dad loved it, mon thought it was ok. Could go dancing in real time so I went back in my mind, found a happy memory or two and thought i'd write it down for them and you. Thanks for reading. Write on..

WordSlinger commented on BRYAN & DEE FAHRIG

09-23-2009

Awesome, I bet you had fun with this one, researchn' and family talks, you put together a good write. Bless them and you..

Tempestlady

11/21/2009

Didn't have to do much resesarch at all, been told the stories since i was about t foot tall. Foun some goodmemories that day and thought I'd share them. Write on...

SpiritSong commented on BRYAN & DEE FAHRIG

09-15-2009

Love it! What a wonderful tribute to loves endurance..of 48yrs of laughter and tears...The dance of true love it indeed not smooth all of the time, but two who work together can have times of wonderful rhythm and flow..and beautiful times of laughter to hide in the heart and share forever..and how great is that a precious lady...thank you for sharing this...I really liked it.."SpiritSong"

Tempestlady

09/27/2009

Glad you liked it. Posted a new one if your interested.

Whiteraven commented on BRYAN & DEE FAHRIG

09-15-2009

Very special I hope your parents enjoyed it. I think it is a good walk down your memory lane.

Tempestlady

09/27/2009

Mom said it was beautiful. Thanks

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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