Buried Alive

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    Buried Alive

    Losing myself in this battle,
    Wounded, scarred, no end to this pain in sight.
    Tired of fighting, yet still unwilling to succumb
    To the misery enveloping me like a shroud.
    Buried alive in this shallow grave,
    Death refuses my advances.
    My cries go unheard in this darkness;
    My soul is forced to endure unrelenting silence.
    I strike out blindly,
    Attempting to destroy an enemy I cannot see or touch, only sense,
    Like impending doom lurking on the bleak horizon.
    Strengthless, broken, trembling in need,
    Begging for someone to release me from the agony of being alone.
    It's true what they say:
    Loneliness can kill.
    But....
    Some things kill quickly,
    While others prolong the sweetness of death's release...
    And living too long
       takes more than time.

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    lonewolf commented on Buried Alive

    01-16-2011

    very good write. we have all felt this way at one time or another. hold on to your dream and never let go. love will find your heart again.

    Teardrops commented on Buried Alive

    12-05-2010

    I have walked this valley and its not pretty . I came back because if i go this way then i will never see the one i loved and lost . Great write my friend marie

    freemansvoice commented on Buried Alive

    12-05-2010

    the end? when you end it all it's over. the sun doesn't come up , the birds don't sing, and every one hates you because you have taken away a gift of God with so much promise. Yea relationships suck sometimes, but not always. Take another chance.

    kdarcy commented on Buried Alive

    08-14-2010

    Hopefully with the release of emotion, it can help to better prepare you and all who read your work to grow strong, holding togetherness when it finds its home in you. Been there, done that. Nice write, sorry that too many can relate with it, be well. I write up and down, check out my offerings, thanks

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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    Shadow of Love 3
    i have to ask 15
    heart of stone 10
    the struggle 5
    I'LL NEVER LETGO 2
    imprisoned 4
    PASSAGES 1
    LET HIM GO 2
    GARDEN OF HOPE 2
    WHISPERED NOTHINGS 0
    ANYMORE 2
    EMPTY PRETENSES 1
    LIFE OF LIES 1
    Shattered Heart 3
    JUST GO 1
    sifting through the madness 3
    I REMEMBER 4
    THIS TOO SHALL PASS 4
    MIRROR OF TRUTH 8
    untitled #18 2
    Untitled # 7 3
    SORROW 1
    UNTRUE HEART 0
    ALONE 1
    i wonder 1
    TIME TO SPARE 2
    SHHH.... 4
    THE DESTRUCTION OF MY MIND 0
    the end 3
    THE SEARCH 1
    UNTITLED #12 1
    DISTANT 1
    FOR MEICHELLE 2
    THE INNOCENCE THAT KILLS 2
    ECHO 4
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