Burn

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Burn

Smoldering Flames

Licking Skin

Embers Flicker

Hair like rope

Burst

Melting flesh

Shriek

Soul rises

Body dies

 

© 2013 Brittiany  O’ Neil

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Trista3 commented on Burn

12-09-2013

That was potent. short but the point is made well very quickly. good job.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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